Comment assignment 1.1 Suzanne Dietz
(http://suusonthesocial.blogspot.nl/2014/09/sorry-what-do-you-actually-say-in.html)
Sorry, what do you actually say
I think in this post you succeed in defining the meaning of business and profit. You give insights on the different views on this topic, motivated from more than one field. I think you give a broad explanation to the question, which gives me and maybe fellow readers a new look on the topic.
However I found the intro a bit misleading, beginning about oil and graphs (without any links or images), I was a bit confused whether the post was about something else (oil). What also would help me understanding the story is a conclusion. And last, an easy spelling check in word can already make a difference in the amount of mistakes.
Comment assignment 1.2 Suzanne Dietz
(http://suusonthesocial.blogspot.nl/)
Missing
Comment assignment 1.1 Raissa Ulbrich (http://sspmbloginanawesomeautumn.wordpress.com/2014/09/18/puzzle-industrial-ecology/#comments)
Puzzle- industrial ecology
I think you made your arguments in this puzzle very evident, with also a clear introduction and conclusion. In the beginning I was experiencing some difficulties on what the puzzle exactly was (you spoke about both satisfaction or product endurance in relation to the increase of income), and what your statement was. Maybe a link to a graph would help? In argument number 2 I was missing a link to your statement of the puzzle, so the argumentation was not immediately clear to me. The conclusion helped me to convince me of your statement.
Comment assignment 1.2 Raissa Ulbrich
(http://sspmbloginanawesomeautumn.wordpress.com/2014/09/18/the-business-of-businesses-is-to-increase-its-profit/#comments)
THE BUSINESS OF BUSINESSES IS TO INCREASE ITS PROFIT”
I found your story very clear, you wrote strong stating sentences that give a convincing edge to your post. In the second part you give a short explanation how these profits can be increased, by efficiency and exploring new markets, in my opinion you provide a base for your opinion this way. I think your attitude of writing is quite convincing. But, I would maybe less generalize the types of businesses, so the post would give a broader and more convincing statement.
Comment assignment 2.1 Cenyang Tang
(http://cenyangtang.blogspot.nl/2014/10/the-primary-goal-but-not-for-profit-only.html#comment-form)
The primary goal but not for profit
Nice summary of your opinion to this topic in the beginning. Good referring to a movie and a following personal interpretation to this statement. And a good conclusion to sum up your story and relate it to the theory of Friedman. Be careful with your own statements, be clear that this is your opinion and not a common statement (‘it’s really Irresponsible’),. Next to that, your story is kind of shortly explained, and your opinion is not supported by any theories. I would have liked a more broad explanation of your opinion, seen from more views within the business industry. And please, do a spelling check:
‘if Friedman’s words is (are) totally right, why (are) people involved in(this)?’…?
‘quility’..? (quality)
and many more
Comment assignment 2.2 Cenyang Tang
(http://cenyangtang.blogspot.nl/2014/10/decisionmaking-in-site-selection.html)
Decisionmaking in site selection
It is a good example to use the allocation of a university center for his topic. You explained it clear and briefly, with a good introduction and examples. However I am missing a conclusion, and what would help your story is to give a better explanation of both concepts (rational and bounded ) and the referring literature, in special the rational decision making model. Overall, I would have written an more complex and expanded post, and would have done a spelling check in the end (‘i’ = I, ‘universitiy’, capital letters, ‘ alternates’, ‘fianlly’). I hope this will help you.
Comment assignment 2.1 zhongveer
(https://weiwenzhong.wordpress.com/2014/10/04/turn-off-your-shop-lights-at-night-please/)
Turn off your shop lights at night please
The topic you have chosen is a good example for the decision making models, in my opinion. Everyone could relate to this topic, and the link to the article helps to make your post to be more clear and interesting. I think you wrote an obvious explanation how it was a rational decision making process, but maybe you could have given a legit reason why it was rational:
suggestion:
“The news says this law can save about two terawatt hour of electricity a year, which equals to the annual consumption of 750,000 households, and is expected to save 250,000 tonnes of CO2. From these we could say this is a rational decision-making. “…….. + , because the best alternative is chosen (= link to theory of the rational model)
The second part where you explain that the decision is bounded, is very clear to me. It relates back to the statement that the original goal was to change attitudes and be a pioneer in reducing light pollution, and change the culture. Although I think the statement that says that it is not really significant, relates more to the overall energy consumption . I do think it has an influence on the culture in France, because everyone can notice the difference with- and reason behind turning of the lights during the night. Off course, this is my opinion and not yours, but maybe you could have been more precise in your argumentation. And why do citizens expect the government to do something with the environment?
And I like that you give your own opinion about this topic, it is good to be a supporter of this rule and that for that reason you choose to write about this.
Hope it will help you
Comment assignment 2.2 zhongveer
(https://weiwenzhong.wordpress.com/2014/10/01/everything-is-connected/)
Everything is connected
Your introduction is in my opinion very good, it really is written to introduce the problem in an interesting way. The example you give helps to strengthen the problem you address. I think you relate it very well to the theory of Friedman, and what your opinion is about this. You dove into the article because I see you relate to several points in his theory. What I would prefer is that the story would have been a little bit longer, with addition of theories to support your opinion. Because if so short, I am missing a broad view on the topic
Comment assignment 3. Koen Kuipers
(http://koenjjkuipers.wordpress.com/2014/10/08/assignment-3-09-10-2014/)
Assignment 3
After reading your blog, your story is very clear to me. The first part about the Ostrom´s framework is very well explained with the theory and an it is an example everyone can relate to. The conflicting interest in this case are written down and also every system of Ostrom´s framework is explained. To only thing I would add to this part is a brief explanation, link or image of his theory. The second part on the Friedman position is very well explained, but maybe you could have repeated the theory behind it.
Comment assignment 3. Özkan Larçin
http://olarcin.blogspot.nl
missing
Comment Assignment 4. Elke
https://anieperspective.wordpress.com/
Missing
4. Comment assignment 4. Kjell Wansleeben http://kwansleeben.wordpress.com/2014/10/10/legitimacy-in-organizations-the-nokia-case/#more-145
‘Legitimacy in organizations, the Nokia case ‘
Dear Kjell Wansleeben,
You give a good introduction to the documentary and a summary of the different interests, or goals, of nokia and its supplier in China. Both actors are explained and the different in types of legitimacies between China and Finland become very clear. In this story you see the ‘shady’ type of business by te supplier as accepted by the Chinese society. However, who says the society is accepting this situation. In my opinion, the ‘shady’ way of doing business is shady for another reason besides showing it to Nokia. Maybe because it is not accepterd by the society.
In the end, you give a summary to what you have seen in the docu, saying that nokia is not able to make a difference. Maybe you could have given a broader view, besides what you have seen in the documentary, using other examples and theories about supply and demands. I would say, Nokia does have a certain power to influence its supplier.
Comment assignment 5. Jason Kiem
http://sspm-ie.blogspot.nl/
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Comment assignment 5. Stephany Lie
http://stephanysspm.blogspot.nl/2014/10/assignment-5.html
‘Assignment 5’
Dear Stephany Lie
The beginning of the post consist of a good explanation and visualization of the concerning company and its related actors. The actors are visually divided in their influences on the central company and you give a good explanation to their goals and dependencies. What I miss in the introduction, is the goals of the article, what do you want to provide describing this network? However in the conclusion you give a good summary, making clear if a closed loop is possible with several examples. You make good use of excisting theories, providing as well as explaning in relation to your topic.
Comment assignment 6. Anne van Bruggen
socialsystemsinperspective.wordpress.com
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Assignment 6. Bob Dubbeldam
http:\\bobindustrial.wordpress.com
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Comment assignment 7 (8?). Hans Peter Honkoop
https://hanspeterhonkoop.wordpress.com/2014/11/19/the-car-game/
The Car Game
In this post you describe the game and give an improved version of the firstly played gamed played during class. I think you give a better and improved version of the first one. However i am missing the reason why an improvement is made and the relation to social systems.
Comment assignment 7. Marie-Louise de Kruiff
https://sspmblog.wordpress.com/2014/11/19/its-all-in-the-evolutionary-game/
It’s all in the evolutionary game
You give a very enthusiastic and practical approach to the game played in the lectures op SSPM. And next to this, you give a relation to the term of evolution. This is explained by two parts, one related to this class. Every concept is very well explained to provide a better understanding of all of the related terms. In the second part, you are explaining the game very well, the part of every group/actor is written down, so together they can form a dynamic game. The part which I’m missing a bit, is a more expanded and practical view on how the game will evolve and result according to you.